Sunday, October 12, 2008

Domestic
I am edgy to get there
and edgy to leave
trying to always find the right thing
pacing like a captive animal
worn rut in my view
that despite my persistent motion
never changes
just wears deeper
I cannot find now
with tomorrow coming
shielding myself from
the steady blow
of the onlooker's pointing finger

-kaw kaw kiyree by the Corbyhawk who is rethinking the title, maybe domestic bliss but then that is too sarcastic...

2 comments:

  1. hmmm...reads more like a family Sunday dinner.

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  2. Ha!! I did not think of it that way at all!!
    Good one Jean,
    Corby

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